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The diagrams show how the bee makes honey and the stages in the production of honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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This
 diagram describes a multi-step process of
honey
 production by
bees
. It consists of 07 steps starting with
bees
 leaving their hives and ending with the production of
honey
.
Bees
 act as the intermediate carriers between the
flowers
 and the hive.
First
, a group of
bees
 leave their hive to the areas full of
flowers
 and they start collecting
nectar
 stored inside
flowers
. They will lay on the
flowers
 and collect
nectar
 which is later used in the production of
honey
.
Next
, the
bees
 will carry that collected
nectar
 with them to the cells of their hive. In order to make
honey
, the
bees
 fly to a great number of
flowers
 amassing a massive amount of
nectar
. After
this
 step is completed
then
 they circulate air into the cells by using their wings which aids in the transformation of
nectar
 to
honey
. After that, the
nectar
 becomes more and more concentrated due to evaporation.
Finally
,
honey
 is formed as the end product.
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