It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

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very necessary for any individual's life .As a consequence, it opined by a few
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that it is more beneficial for learners to study art as well as
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instead
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the impending subdivisions. Commencing with the disagreement side ,
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first
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and foremost, by learning
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and
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on account of art and
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students
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become
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member
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society
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. To be specific , by learning
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,one can become
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or
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society
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by checking
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diagnosing diseases, which
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possible in arts and
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. What is more ,
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scientist
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is contributing member of
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different discoveries of
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life has been changed
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many
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time , by means of
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prescribed pills and vaccines which has been discovered by
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scientist
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, life can be saved
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many
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, by learning
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and
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people
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can enhance their
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and thinking ability
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for learning pragmatic
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students
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need to get practical
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, in which ,
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use their own thinking ability, whereas
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in
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and
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subject ,
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have to read
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theoretical
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, by means of
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, learners can get
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name and fame in the world .
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, Charlie Chaplin
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famous funny actor .by enhancing his
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now he is amusing the world. To commence with the
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gives
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about our forefathers and
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root cause of every
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.To
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to know
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an information
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learn
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as it reveals
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data from primitive men to
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era Apart from that , it gives information from
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to
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era which cannot be learnt by
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and
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. To conclude, by learning
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and
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become
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of
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society
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and they can enhance
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knowledge
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and
creativity
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On the other hand
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literature
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, one can get information about
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ancient times.

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