You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words.

#city #vacation #hotel #manager #points #suggestions #recommendations #complaints

Dear Madhav, I am writing

this

letter to share my experience at your

hotel

few

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a few

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positives and

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negatives.

First

I will discuss

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high and low points of the

hotel

and

then

I will discuss

about

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the suggestions and complaints about

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the

hotel

. I say my stay at your

hotel

was

good

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experience, to say about some

highlite

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highlight

highlighted

points were the availability of television in the

hotel

room

. The TV was connected to Tata play and almost all my

favorate

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favourite

channels were available. The

second

point is that the staff were very responsive to my requests,

for

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I ordered food from the landline phone available in the

room

and within minutes they served me food.

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also

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there are few negative points one of

such

was non-availability of fan in the

room

. Though the AC was operating, I usually prefer running

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the fan

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fan

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in the

room

so there is free movement of air. I have one suggestion

that

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please

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setup

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hot water and

fan

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a fan

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in the

room

that

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are

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must

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for people like me. I have one

complain

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that it

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frequently disconnects. Hope you will take my feedback positively, Yours sincerely, Phaneendra

Submitted by Phaneendra on Mon Jan 23 2023

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2Word repetition
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23Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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