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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter ● explain where the restaurant is ● describe what you ate in the restaurant ● say why you would recommend the restaurant to others

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. Recently, I and my family visited your
restaurant
. And your
restaurant
located
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 near our house . I always walk in
in
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front of your
restaurant
 and I said myself that one day I will come here with my family.
That is
 why I and my family visited here.
Then
 we ordered
meal
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 that in your menu . Your menu had a lot of meals . But we choose one . That meal was plov. After that,we ate
this
 meal and came back
out
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home with excellent emissions. Because we never eat
this
 kind of delicious plov. We always prepare
this
 meal at home but it
test
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 not like your
restaurant
 ʼs .
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 is
reason
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, we suggest your
restaurant
our
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 all relatives and
neighbors
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. We said
their
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they're
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 your
restaurant
 good services. At the end of my letter, I would say
that
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thank you for your service. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, ....... Khamrayeva Munisa.
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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