Writing an application letter to an organisation working with children to volunteer for a part-time job. Please say - why do you want to work there? - why are you suitable for this job? - when will you be able to start?

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Dear Sir, I am wiring to apply for a part-time job in order to volunteer for the activities your

organization

performs. I am giving my final exam at the end of the year and it's mandatory for all the students to perform any volunteer activity for any NGO. I chose your

organization

because my father

has

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apply

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worked for

this

NGO some years back and he referred your NGO to me. I believe I am a perfect fit for

this

part-time

organization

because the job skills you required are that the person should be loving, soft-spoken and energetic and I possess all of these skills.

Also

, I met one more job requirement that the persons should be available anytime when needed so yes I am available anytime when my services are required. I want to clarify that I don't want any stipend to perform

this

precious activity and I am available immediately

this

week. I would be grateful if you could give me a chance to work as a volunteer in your esteemed

organization

. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Sana Farooq

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7 paragraphs

184 words

8.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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