Example Letter: Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill

#internet #connection #service #provider #engineer #visit #home #request #reduction #bill

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to the internet.

Firstly

,I would like to point out that I am an English teacher.I am conducting my lessons online.Unfortunately,recently I have confronted a connection problem due to internet interruptions.

That is

why I was obliged to cancel my 5

last

lessons.

This

situation has become irritating for me. I would be extremely grateful if you could do anything to help me in order to overcome

this

concern as soon as possible.If it is possible,one suggestion would be to appoint an engineer to come to my home and solve the defect. It is fear to demand compensation for lost time because

this

fault comes from your service and you are responsible for fulfiling the drawback.

Instead

of compensation,I offer to decrease my bill to a certain time. I hope you will address

this

issue as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Tue Jan 24 2023

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

151 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dissatisfaction
Intermittent
Impact
Urgency
Compensation
Resolution
Service provider
Inconvenience
Streamlining
Connectivity

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Example Letter: Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bill

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