Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of adevrtising. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that Society could use a total break from every form of advertisement all at once. In my view

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I partly agree with

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I would argue that there are

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a number of benefits in

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field. On one hand, advertisements are

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a big part of our lives that we can not imagine our lives

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.

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, it is hard to imagine a public place

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as an airport or a shopping mall without the flashing lights of billboards or the brilliant

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of giant posters and signs. The commercials are

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a big part of public places and eye sights that sometimes people are very used to seeing them and that can sometimes be without any concentrated attention.

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, new forms of infomercials and announcements are created

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and

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makes it harder for people to ignore them.

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, commercials played in

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social media are one of the trends in advertising and

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has built a new platform for marketing and influencing societies.

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tool has made businesses easier to access and on another level business owners are more likely to introduce their

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products

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or service to their customers.

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has made a ton of unwanted information available on online platforms and these infomercials are not evaluated by any sort of standards other than advertising channels so the validity of these commercials can not be recognized by the

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customers

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correctly. In conclusion, despite the fact that society could use a total ban

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advertisement

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advertisements

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there are many issues which will be influenced by

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act which can be considered like the sights in

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public places and the businesses that rely on

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announcements in order to survive are two of many reasons

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can not happen worldwide.