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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-class activities to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #teenagers #work #money #lessons #sacrifice #rest #after-class #activities
Many students choose to work
while
 studying.
This
 helps them become good members
for
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 society alongside making money.
However
, others opine evening time and its activities, if not more, are equally significant. The argument a group put forward is that after-school activities help students develop skills and refresh. Evening classes have a wide range of options from language and vocational courses, to music and art. Many
teenagers
 may develop an interest in a field and choose it as
career
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 path. Another point they might mention is that
school
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 curriculum is heavy enough.
The young
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 adults need some time to study the lessons and unwind for a
while
.
This
 helps them excel in lessons and get some rest to regain energy. But all the same-when working,
teenagers
 can develop soft skills;
this
 is how the
second
 group think. They believe the challenges work throws at the youth teach them problem-solving. They
also
 learn etiquette when talking to their manager or customer.
Such
 important lessons would help them later
further
 and faster develop professionally.
Moreover
, they become organized and learn to fend for themselves. Managers usually cannot tolerate lateness or cutting corners.
Therefore
, the young can sooner and better adapt
with
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policies
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 of
working
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the working
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 environment. They add that earning a salary can build confidence in
teenagers
 and that they become money-conscious. Income in many societies is seen as a sign of maturity and because it is gained hard,
teenagers
 begin to understand that money does not grow on trees. In conclusion,
although
 extracurricular activities are useful, youngsters learn appropriate conduct at work, qualify to make money and boost confidence; these are not something to be achieved
elsewhere
 rather than
actual
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 working conditions.
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