Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals argue that addressing
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global warming is not
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way.They recommend that it would be better if we look for new methods to live with
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situation.I completely disagree with
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statement. First and foremost,climate
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is not inevitable.We can tackle
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concern.It is true that we have a lot of opportunities in order to alleviate it.If we do not
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several problems in
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temperature affects people negatively.The hottest countries
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organism adaptation process to high and low temperatures will cause diseases.
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field will suffer more hot boiling weather conditions.
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certain specifications.They are unable to work under 60 or 70
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,as long as we have
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to compete
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warming,we should not surrender.
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in order to live with climate,I entirely disagree with
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notion because of the above-mentioned reasons.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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