Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the
last
50 years, there has been a significant decrease
to
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the global animal population. Some
people
have spent a lot of effort to protect these endangered beings. Personally, I believe there are ways that we could implement to mitigate
this
issue
, namely global
awareness
and government interventions.
Firstly
,
awareness
is the key to
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this
issue
. With
rapidly
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decreasing animal population, it should be balanced by a significant increase in
awareness
among
people
globally. The more
people
know and understand about
this
issue
, the more actions can be taken to help prevent animal extinction.
For instance
, in
recent
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era
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, social media has
the
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power to influence
people
efficiently
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a massive scale.
This
should be utilized to promote the importance of animal welfare and the critical situation that animals are facing.
Although
not everyone will react, perhaps there are
few
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donations and individual actions that can help
supress
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suppress
this
issue
.
Awareness
itself is not sufficient to tackle
such
a global
issue
. A large
amount
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of resources are necessary to perform the acts.
This
role can be delegated to the government as they have the
authoritive
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authoritative
power and resources that can make
significant
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impact.
For example
, they can build a zoo, which not only does it provide shelter for animals, but
it
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also
promotes the importance of wildlife.
Moreover
, they have the power of words. One significant speech regarding endangered wildlife can change the actions of many
people
In conclusion,
although
the reduction in
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wildlilfe
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wildlife
population is a huge
issue
, there are still chances that we could prevent their extinction if we act immediately. These immediate acts could be done by individuals but they
also
need the full support of a more powerful entity
such
as the government to successfully deal with the
issue
.
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