You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Roger, I hope that

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letter finds you well. Guess what! I'm going to Canada to do a Supply Chain course. As you know, I love the logistics area and since you moved to Canada I'm inspired to follow your path. My studies will begin in February and,

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I've saved money to pay my studies fees, I need to find a job to support my costs for 2 years, when

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I will take my certification and find a better position. In order to cover

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economic necessity, I was wondering if you can help me to find a part-time job with your networking. By the way, I have experience in your area, which has a dense demand in Toronto, so if I find a job in that city, will be easier to go to university and to work. I am looking forward to your answer. Best wishes, Franklin Vale.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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