The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The given pie charts illustrate the
percentage
of water
used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North America
, south
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South
America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.
Overall
, the percentage
of water
usage
varies in the six country
. Change to a plural noun
countries
The
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Water
water
usage
for agricultural
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the agricultural
an agricultural
purpose
has the most significant Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
percentage
in all of the six countries which accounted for over a
half except in North Correct article usage
apply
America
and Europe. These two countries makes
up nearly 50% of the Change the verb form
make
water
usage
for industry
.
The least Add an article
the industry
usage
of water
is for domestic
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the domestic
a domestic
purpose
which together accounted for less than 25% in each country. The Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
percentage
of the purpose may vary from the condition and specialization in the country. For example
, North America
and Europe tend to have cold and unfertilized land, however
they have an edge on Add the comma(s)
,however
industry
, Add an article
the industry
it
leads to Correct pronoun usage
which
the
less Correct article usage
apply
in
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apply
water
usage
for agricultural
yet the biggest Replace the word
agriculture
percentage
of water
use for industry.Submitted by syafiramdr on
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