The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The given pie charts illustrate the
percentage
of
water
used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North
America
,
south
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America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.
Overall
, the
percentage
of
water
usage
varies in the six
country
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.
The
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water
usage
for
agricultural
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the agricultural
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purpose
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has the most significant
percentage
in all of the six countries which accounted for over
a
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half except in North
America
and Europe. These two countries
makes
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up nearly 50% of the
water
usage
for
industry
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the industry
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. The least
usage
of
water
is for
domestic
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the domestic
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purpose
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which together accounted for less than 25% in each country. The
percentage
of the purpose may vary from the condition and specialization in the country.
For example
, North
America
and Europe tend to have cold and unfertilized land,
however
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they have an edge on
industry
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the industry
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,
it
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which
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leads to
the
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apply
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less
in
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water
usage
for
agricultural
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yet the biggest
percentage
of
water
use for industry.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, america, usage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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