You work for an international company. You have seen a advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •Describe the training course you want to do •Explain what the company could do to help you •Say how the course will be useful to your job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to request you to make a registration to join a workshop which would be beneficial for my career and our company as well.

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, As I have seen an advertisement about

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workshop on Java script language, I would like to participate in

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two days program. It will be on the coming weekend so, it would not affect my office hours.

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the registration process is completely free, but I am not able to register directly.It is mentioned that the company should send an official letter with the employee details to the human resource department of Intel private limited,

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only they will consider our registration process.

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, In our coding ,department we are using the PHP program. So, we are not much aware of the advantages and practical areas of Java scripts. As a software engineer, if I could get an opportunity to explore another language it would advantageous for our company's growth and productivity. I would be grateful if you could consider my request. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Asha Vijayan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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