You have decided to leave your current job eventhough you enjoy it. Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision. In your letter tell the manager about your decision and the reason for it describe what you learnt in your current job and ask the manager to write a reference letter to help you with future employment

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Dear Mr Hamada, I am writing to inform you that I have decided to resign as assistant section manager of

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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1 department.

This

was a hard decision for me to make.

This

has been my first and only job for the

last

years

However

, the family has decided to migrate to Australia to look for better job opportunities. For the

last

couple of

years

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,years

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my family has been struggling financially and emotionally. Luckily, when I reconnected with my college friend who's been staying in Australia and he offered to help me look for a job there. It was a wonderful 15

years

in MAPLE. I learned a lot about handling people and somehow that experience changed me to become a better person. And if it was not because of you, I would not be where I am now.

Lastly

, I would like to ask you a favour to write me a reference letter for my future employment. I look forward to hearing from you and I wish MAPLE all the success in the coming

years

. Yours sincerely, (signed) Anna Smith

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

182 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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