Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than local films. Why is this the case? Should government invest money in local film industry?

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Many
people
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prefer to watch foreign
films
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rather than local
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. There are many reasons of that. First off all it depends on country where you live.
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, I live in Azerbaijan. On my opinion
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here are boring and in Azerbaijani language. I prefer watching
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in Russian or English languages.
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not all
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are wonderful and interesting, it means that it
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depends on movie.
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there are plenty of different types of
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: horror, comedy, fantasy, fantastic, datective and others.
People
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prefer watching different types of
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. Not in all countries
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are great. Some countries or cities are popular because of
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, but some countries don’t think about it. I think
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are not too important and it is not necessary for
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to develop
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.
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this
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,
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can improve education, health, armies and other important things. But more thing,it would be not bad if
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will improve filming.
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will probably watch those
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and
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will have more popularity. Lots of
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may visit
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counties. There are many famous counties where are spread out
movies
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. Examples are : United States of America and Turkey.
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love watching there
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. Maybe it is because
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movies
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are keeping interesting moments that makes
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watch
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films
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. It can be
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because of famous
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who take part in
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films
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. Usually
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love watching
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where are there favorite actors or actresses. One more reason is that creators of
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too often buy Reklam that make there film popular. Reklam dare everywhere: on internet,in news, on TV. For many
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other
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’s comments are important and when they see posetive comments, they decide to watch film.
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