The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

This
table indicates information about the
population
figures in 2003 165
million
people
in these countries, and other points discussed in
this
essay.
To begin
,
Firstly
, In 2003 165
million
population
provide information about the info, But in 2025, more
people
,
Hence
I will think about
this
in 2050 around three
times
more.
For example
, In 2003 165million
population
, Because
people
had not talked to others, But today's generation is very wrong and they populate born. I am suggested to
people
who simply lived, so
this
is very good, Not only their children take care of But
also
seeing how to talk with them and what to do.
Moreover
, In 2025
population
data
increased from 7
times
to 2003, and goes to 865
million
, for in 2050 bigger update around 10
times
.
For example
, In 2025
population
growth increased 7
times
and today 865
million
, But In 2050 I will think
data
going to 1865
million
, and more. I am thinking increased
data
was very good in the few past years,
However
In 2050
data
growth is very much, But
this
is very good for the future. In conclusion. In the future drastic change, and
data
increasing very good in the near years,
Hence
,
population
growth is very good, for the
people
.
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