Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to the subsidised part-time

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. I am interested to register for

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program and I believe I am a suitable applicant. With regard to my qualifications and work experience, I recently graduated with my bachelor of architecture degree and I have several work experiences. I have been working part-time as a student architect at a company in Melbourne, and I am currently providing a digital marketing service as my freelance business. The

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that I am seeking is the Master of Architecture

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. The university provides an option for

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to be attended part-time.

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, the

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runs for 6 months and it has two subjects with live classes recurring every Monday and Tuesday. I believe

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meets the two-day requirement stated in your advertisement.

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will improve my knowledge of architecture and design. Which ultimately, enable me to register as an architect.

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critical for my career advancement at the office I am currently working. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to your reply. Yours Faithfully, Sam

sam_danielo

Jan 26, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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184 words

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Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

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