Write a letter to a financial organization that gives money to students who would like to take a part-time course. Mention - qualifications and work experience - details about the course - how this course will help you

#organization #money #students #course #qualifications #work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to the subsidised part-time

course

. I am interested to register for

this

program and I believe I am a suitable applicant. With regard to my qualifications and work experience, I recently graduated with my bachelor of architecture degree and I have several work experiences. I have been working part-time as a student architect at a company in Melbourne, and I am currently providing a digital marketing service as my freelance business. The

course

that I am seeking is the Master of Architecture

course

. The university provides an option for

this

course

to be attended part-time.

Furthermore

, the

course

runs for 6 months and it has two subjects with live classes recurring every Monday and Tuesday. I believe

this

meets the two-day requirement stated in your advertisement.

This

course

will improve my knowledge of architecture and design. Which ultimately, enable me to register as an architect.

Moreover

this

course

also

critical for my career advancement at the office I am currently working. Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to your reply. Yours Faithfully, Sam

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