The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree.
In the recent decade, trends
of
shopping Change preposition
in
has
been increased exponentially regardless of Change the verb form
have
people
backgrounds. But the interesting fact is most of the shopping sales Change noun form
people's
has
been carried out Correct subject-verb agreement
have
through
online compare to Change preposition
apply
offline
regardless of Use synonyms
people
shopping Correct word choice
whether people
it
from rural or urban areas which in turn causes the shops to be closed permanently. I strongly believe that online shopping will up hand Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
offline
stores.
Earlier, shopping was a resemblance of status showcasing activity by purchasing costly items like electronic gadgets, limited Use synonyms
editions
goods and Change the noun form
edition
high quality
clothes etc. But presently Add a hyphen
high-quality
due to
the introduction of online easy Linking Words
of
delivery, returning in case Change preposition
apply
damage
and their attractive offers draws customers to order from their home wherever they Change preposition
of damage
resides
.
Change the verb form
reside
For instance
, a person ordering Linking Words
the
items Correct article usage
apply
from
Change preposition
apply
the
online Correct article usage
apply
have
its own perks Correct subject-verb agreement
has
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
offline
stores like Use synonyms
good
discount, Add an article
a good
lot
of options, Change the article
a lot
hassle free
of exchanging and Add a hyphen
hassle-free
also
numerous amount of reviews given by the users helps Linking Words
the
other customers in purchasing them. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
to these other trends is been carried out in the way Linking Words
purchasing
the items using gift coupons provided by Change preposition
of purchasing
the
companies or friends. The flexibility of using them to purchase them draws the Correct article usage
apply
attentions
of buyers to stick Fix the agreement mistake
attention
for
online Change preposition
apply
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
offline
. Where Use synonyms
these kind
of diversity in purchasing Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
through
Change preposition
apply
offline
is missing and it would be Use synonyms
loss
for the sellers if they carry out the business in the same as online sellers Add an article
a loss
due to
Linking Words
varies
Replace the word
various
reason
to mention Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
few
of them would be transportation and workforce.
Correct article usage
a few
To conclude
Linking Words
although
Linking Words
offline
stores Use synonyms
gives
the freedom for the customers to verify the product in place to purchase, it would be better for the same person to undergo several reviews and rating before ordering them Change the verb form
give
along with
the easiness of exchange Linking Words
polices
and home deliveries. Correct your spelling
policies
Therefore
seeing all the benefits of online over Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
offline
it is guaranteed that one or the other day it would lead shops in towns and cities Use synonyms
to
be Fix the infinitive
apply
shutdown
.Correct your spelling
shut down
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