Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: ● Say why you would like to go on the trip ● Suggest what you could do to help during the trip ● Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear Ms Fareha, Hope you are well. I am writing with regard to the short tour that your school has arranged for the students. I came to know that mothers can
also
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join you,
hence
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I decided to take part in
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activity. I can't permit my child to go alone for 3 nights' stay in another territory,
therefore
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I decided to join him.
This
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way, I can
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keep an eye on his daily meal intake,
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I can make him explore a foreign land and can engage him in different activities because he is introverted and shy.
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, I have been to
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place three years ago and
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I know the beautiful places to explore so I can guide the group to find mesmerizing destinations and perform different fun activities.
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, I want to know the details about
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visit as well.
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, how many students and teachers are going, what faculties are going to join us, what is the mode of travel, etc. I would be grateful if you could write to me with the aforementioned details. Looking forward to hearing back from you. yours sincerely, Sana Farooq
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enthusiastic
  • valuable experience
  • expertise
  • educational objectives
  • supervision
  • ensure safety
  • bonding
  • workshops
  • logistics
  • coordinates
  • travel arrangements
  • clear communication
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • manage schedules
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