English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Offer to find a place for him / her to live. 2. Give advice about how to find a part time job. 3. Give information on where they can learn your language.

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Dear Sam, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am delighted to hear that you’re moving to town to study

year. My family would be excited to accommodate you in our house until you find a place to stay. But if you seek independence, you might take a look at my friend’s apartment for rent, which is just a few minutes from our house. If you’re interested, I can talk to the landlord to have a room reserved. You mentioned

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one of your chats that you are planning to get a part-time job any moment soon. Actually, you could already apply for one online, just visit the university’s job portals to keep your eyes on the latest job updates. I think it is best if you apply for jobs which are highly related to your course. By doing that, you will be best considered for the vacancy. Another thing, it is very advisable for you to learn our local language since you will be staying with us for several years. But looking for a great school is never a problem for I greatly recommend a language school which offers quality instruction at a very reasonable price. You could visit their website to see good sets of feedback from their clients. I look forward to

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you the soonest. With kind regards, Raysan Joy

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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