You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat)- discuss your furnishing taste

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Dear Sir, Madame, May I write

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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

letter asking for some information regarding your proposal

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promptly, my wife and I just signed off for a brand new cottage in the valley 15

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drive from your store. As a matter of fact, we are now looking forward to our future indoor decorations and it seems like you could be the right supplier to work with. We went through your website a couple of days ago and we paid attention to your stunning homemade frames designed with odd wood. I would be pleased to get a little more information related to those items. In fact, I would like to know which material is used and what is the process to make it. Plus, prices are not mentioned in your facilities,

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It would be great to get an approximate range to know if we may afford it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sebastien LANIESSE

laniesse.sebastienThu Jan 26 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

160 words

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