You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat)- discuss your furnishing taste

#home #decorator #information #services #work #name #condominium #{flat #taste

Dear Sir, Madame, May I write

this

letter asking for some information regarding your proposal

Change the punctuation

show examples

To present

myself

Change the pronoun

show examples

promptly, my wife and I just signed off for a brand new cottage in the valley 15

minutes

Change noun form

minutes'

show examples

drive from your store. As a matter of fact, we are now looking forward to our future indoor decorations and it seems like you could be the right supplier to work with. We went through your website a couple of days ago and we paid attention to your stunning homemade frames designed with odd wood. I would be pleased to get a little more information related to those items. In fact, I would like to know which material is used and what is the process to make it. Plus, prices are not mentioned in your facilities,

hence

It would be great to get an approximate range to know if we may afford it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sebastien LANIESSE

Submitted by laniesse.sebastien on Thu Jan 26 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

160 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
.What do you believe are your personal strengths ?
My greatest strengths are self-motivation, time management and organisation skills. I work well under pressure and enjoy helping co-workers get daily tasks completed. I gained these skills when I worked at the Gynecology/Obstetric department in a Municipal Hospital in Japan as a Midwife and Nurse, therefore I am confident and able to work efficiently and effectively.
4
band
Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In 2024, it is a known fact that the labor market is quite intense for job seekers especially for individuals with the least career exposure or experience in their field such as new graduates. A few of these candidates resort to enrolling in additonals accreditations to improve their likelihood of landing adequate employment as opposed to finding supplemental jobs while they search for occupation openings in their field of study. In this write-up, I will detail and express my opinion regarding this viewpoint.
4.5
band
Government give lots of support to artists, even though some people believe it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
These days the Government is giving a lot of attention to artists However there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that spending a lot of money on supporting artists is not useful while another emphasizes that it is a positive step taken by higher authorities.
5
band
An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled?
There is an increase of below-the-line advertising whose main target is children who could be negatively influenced if repetitively watching them over a short time. In my opinion, advertisements showed on television should be put under close supervision of the authority.
6.5
band
It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Reading is really important for everyone, especially for children to become successful in school and their journey through life. However, lots of parents feel struggle when they try to encourage their kids to love reading or just sit tight to listen to their stories. In my opinion, the reason for this is that most children feel reading is so boring and hard. Firstly, there are too many distractions that appeal to children more than reading. Children could choose to watch television or playing with their toys rather than reading a fairy tale. Secondly, reading materials may exceed your child's reading ability. The enthusiasm may be there, but if the book is hard to read, your child’s motivation will wane. As a result, once children lose passion for reading, it's hard to get them back.

Structure your letter

.What do you believe are your personal strengths ?

Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Government give lots of support to artists, even though some people believe it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled?

It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.