You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat) • discuss your furnishing taste

Dear Madam, Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request detailed information about your work. I recently bought an
appartement
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apartment
and I would like to hire an interior decorator. I went through your work on Instagram and I really appreciate what you do. I find some
picture
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on your feed very interesting as they
represente
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represent
represented
everything I like.
Moreover
, I
also
check your review on google and was
surprise
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about your score and your
customer's
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satisfaction. My flat is like a loft of 75 square meters,
nevertheless
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I was wondering about the
possibilty
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possibility
to create one more room for my
homegym
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home gym
. For the decoration, I'm thinking about something simple, modern, white, plus, some wood
furnitures
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furniture
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. You will find
enclose
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some
picture
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of my loft. Could you please tell me about the price of your
prestation
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presentation
and the delay ? My number is +33 6 60 50 40 30, maybe it will be easier to take an appointment to speak about my project. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest
conveniance
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convenience
. Yours sincerely. léa
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