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This chart gives information about the number of people who play video games on a computer or device. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons. (Around 150 words)

This chart gives information about the number of people who play video games on a computer or device. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons. (Around 150 words)
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The bar chart illustrates the number of video gamers, who were younger Americans in 2017 by a variety of classes which are by sexual, race, age or school degree. As a whole, all categories had around half ratio, as for frequency whichever often or sometimes.
Ages
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 18 to 29 had the highest share,
whereas
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 over 65 people had the lowest share. When it comes to the
ages
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

,
ages
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 18 to 29 proportion was the biggest percentage which was the sum of 60% which were often and sometimes, 29 and 31, respectively.
However
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, those over 65
ages
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, they were only 24% in total.
Therefore
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the difference between 18 to 29 and over 65 was 36% in total. As a side note, other departments did not have notable differences. Even though, by sexuals, race or school degrees, the graph depicts around 40% of people that enjoyed playing video games. That frequency was about 20% for each section.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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