The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates people, who are unemployed in the UK, how to spent their time
last
year. As a whole, in women,
housework
had the highest
share
from the morning to the afternoon.
Whereas
men, most of the spent time
job
hunting in the morning,
however
, in the afternoon,
housework
had
also
the highest
share
as same as women. Looking at the table in detail, in women,
housework
was the biggest ratio which was 49% and 21%, in the morning and afternoon, respectively. Following that proportion, shopping,
job
hunting and visiting friends or relatives were popular. Shopping was the second highest
share
which was 34% through a
day
. As a side note, Playing sports had only a 1%
share
even though a
day
. When it comes to men's trend,
job
hunting accounted for the largest ratio in the table, that number was 34% through a
day
. Following
job
hunting, shopping and
housework
had the biggest
share
compared to others.
Whereas
drinking had the lowest
share
which was 5% through a
day
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, share, job, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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