Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in suburbs or countryside rather cities To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has long been argued
that
whether people should move Correct word choice
apply
in
rural areas to avoid gridlocks and to ensure the accessibility of public vehicles or not. Change preposition
to
Although
,
in long run, it results in excessive Remove the comma
apply
traffic
, industries and pollution in villages, it could be helpful to reduce heavy pressure on highways immediately. Here, the following paragraphs are going to highlight some effective measures to eliminate traffic
along with
the benefits and drawbacks of displacement from urban to suburban region
.
To start with, resettlement in Fix the agreement mistake
regions
suburbs
Replace the word
suburban
area
helps to Fix the agreement mistake
areas
redistribution
of transportation uses which may eliminate the wastage of time Correct article usage
the redistribution
that is
occurred when roads are blocked with multiple vehicles such
as cars, buses or lories
. Correct your spelling
lorries
For instance
, it is often observed that in cities, people are using the same routes to drive their private cars where other public transports and commercially driven trucks and lories
are running through. Correct your spelling
lorries
In addition
, private vehicles do not others
and can propose Add a missing verb
have others
seat
Fix the agreement mistake
seats
to
two to four people, Change preposition
apply
it
creates high Correct pronoun usage
which
traffic
on roads as well as
transportation shortage. So, relocation should decrease the disadvantages.
Likewise
, relocating industries and traffic
rules should also
be taken to deal with the demographic explosion. If the big industries use separate routes or other medium
like Fix the agreement mistake
mediums
airway
or river routes for shipment, it can Fix the agreement mistake
airways
also
decrease the problem. Moreover
, strict rules should be imposed to prevent violation of signals on road
and parking in every here and there.
Correct article usage
the road
To conclude
, there are multiple causes of traffic
in cities which can not solve entirely by promoting recyclement only. Rather government has to implement laws; Industrialist
should come forward.Fix the agreement mistake
industrialists
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