Some believe that young people should have a university education, because this will bring benefits to the society in the future. Others, however, think it will lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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My focus is living together the culture is the basis of the way of life because of the culture of each country. There are many differences in terms of traditions, languages and lifestyles in each country. Cultural differences in
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and communication.
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is the national
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and the only official
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of the Southeast Asian country. Almost all
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people from all over the world use
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to communicate with other
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people. And
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special in that the accent of speech is different
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each area. become the culture of each region.
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