Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Do you agree or disagree?

Some folks think that it is best to acknowledge a bad situation like not liking the job or being short on money. I moderately agree with the view that sometimes people have to accept a bad situation. Sometimes, society forces a person not to accept bad situations but that does not end well for everybody. For a few people it is important to accept their failure and move on in life.
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, a person from Mumbai was having trouble with his job.
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he was working for the company he was not enjoying his work. It made him anxious and he went into depression.
, if he had accepted earlier that he
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he might have not gone into depression. So, sometimes it's good to accept setbacks in life to improve mental health.
On the other hand
, acknowledging a bad situation can lead to disadvantages. To be a strong person you have to have a strong heart. Nowadays, the younger generation is neglecting the fact that failure is the key to success. If they feel some exam is difficult
they try to find an alternative solution.
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, research by a professor from Pune states that the children who fail a particular exam are not
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again for the test. They are satisfied with their failure which is not correct. The students should
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an effort to pass the exam. In conclusion, I adhere that sometimes
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decisions for their life and well-being.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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