The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict
an the
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an
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area of manufacture in the town of Norbiton at the moment and the future planning of the site. The most appealing change is
housings
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will be
subtituting
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substituting
factories. Aside from that, other differences
also
exist in several directions.
To begin
with, several differences can be seen in the both northern and southern areas of the bigger roundabout. On the northern part, a
road
will be established straightly separating the river, before it
divided
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into two directions, the west and the east. Just next to the mentioned fork, there will be a large housing. On the southern part, there will be
smaller
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a smaller
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roundabout that on
it’s
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nothern
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northern
east side, a medical centre will be built. On the eastern side of
larger
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roundabout, all of the five previous factories that spread alongside the
road
will be repositioned by three housings. The
road
itself will be divided into two directions by adding the
east
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last
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one. By the end of the fork, on the east and the north, a school and a playground will be established, respectively. A new
road
also
will be emanated on the
north west
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northwest
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of the main roundabout.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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