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As cultural

traditions

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are a part of every person's life and there has been a debate among people to use their

traditions

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to attract tourists which indirectly saves their

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will be causing damage to their customs. I am inclined to the idea of using

culture

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to attract tourism.

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with, we all live in a social world and everyone is curious of knowing about the

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that others follow . So, it is a good idea to attract tourists by showing the peculiarities of a

culture

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. In a recent survey conducted by tourism of India, they revealed that many are joyed to travel abroad to India

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its diversified cultural

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, using

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for attracting tourists can cause deteriorate its values ,there was a recent incident in a country when a tourist who attended a cultural ceremony started to suddenly film ceremonial participants causing inconvenience to them and causing an event to get disturbed.

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these kinds of incidents are rare. In my opinion, people can pass on cultural values to younger generations and help others to know their cultural values which will strengthen the roots of their

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so making money on cultural tourism is a good idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Productivity
2. Urgent matters
3. Prevent potential crises
4. Impact the business
5. Sense of responsibility
6. Dedication
7. Operations
8. Decision-making processes
9. Accessible
10. Flexible work schedule
11. Remote work
12. Work-life balance
13. Availability
14. Employee burnout
15. Stress
16. Mental and physical health
17. Job satisfaction
18. Blur the lines
19. Personal and professional life
20. Disconnect
21. Resentment
22. Morale
23. Valued

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