A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Mary, I am glad to hear that you transferred to your dream

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Sydney University and I am sorry to hear you are having a hard time fitting in. I do have some pieces of advice and hope

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would be helpful to you. First of all, I suggest you try to meet as many people as possible and get to know them through classes or at the

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cafe.

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, I feel the best way to make friends is to meet people who share similar

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as you by joining clubs that you are interested in and signing up for

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activities.

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, there are plenty of online apps you could use to meet friends in Sydney. I heard that Bumble has a new feature to meet BFFs (best friends forever). Once you upload your profile, people who are interested in your profile and descriptions will try to talk to you. Hope

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helps and have a great

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year at Sydney University. Best regards, Kate

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

introduce yourself
genuine interest
rapport
like-minded individuals
school community
volunteer
open-minded
comfort zone
casual setting
hobbies and activities

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