Some people believe that in order to improve educational quality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism on their teachers, but others think it will lead to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays,

peopel

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people

argue

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what

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should

students

make

comments

to their

teacher

in order to enhance educational

quality

. On the one hand, some

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students

should be encouraged to make

comments

sometimes even criticism

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their

teacher

. Addressing questions directly that the

teachers

have is an efficient way to solve the problem and improve the

quality

of education.

For instance

, if

students

are not satisfied with the manner

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the

teacher

presents chemical experiments in front of them, they can ask the

teacher

to play some videos

instead

.

Also

, letting

students

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express their own views to their

teachers

could assist in developing a free and fair atmosphere.

Teachers

usually take the role of judging, which will make some

students

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afraid

to tell their own feelings. If

students

are allowed to present their ideas and

houghts

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thoughts

in a friendly way, there will have less

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between

teachers

and

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students

, eventually

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better studying

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quality

.

On the other hand

, some people believe free

comments

to

student's

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teachers

will have a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. The rules are crucial

under

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many situations. Without restrictions on

comments

,

students

might use hash words or even dirty words to

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on their

teachers

.

This

will lead to a detrimental effect on the relationship between

students

and

teachers

, which can make educators reluctant to do their job, causing the teaching

quality

to drop.

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Moreover

, without

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disciplines

discipline

students

' sense of

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responsibility

responsbility

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will be

development

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negatively. The

responsbility

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responsibility

is helpful in developing many abilities

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but not

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to the understanding of the importance of doing homework because they are free to tell to their

teacher

that they do not want to. In conclusion,

although

students

can make

comments

and show their own opinion, I

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the

extand

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extent

of freedom to express

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be controlled.