Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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people
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with
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to
friends
more than Use synonyms
perious
time. Many Correct your spelling
precious
people
believe that Use synonyms
moing
out from home live with Correct your spelling
moving
going
friends
can be more beneficial rather than living alone. I completely agree and in Use synonyms
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will support my opinion with some examples.
First of all, most Change the capitalization
I
of
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apply
the
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apply
people
don't love to be alone because of the Use synonyms
depession
and try to move far from it by talking with the nearest Correct your spelling
depression
people
.Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
lose
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loss
job
, Correct article usage
a job
money related
stress, Add a hyphen
money-related
daily
pressure can be released by giving the necessary things,emotional attachment and sharing long hours Correct word choice
and daily
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of conversation
conversation
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conversations
from
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with
friends
, relatives or the nearest person. If Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
wants
to keep motivated and live with a healthy mind Change the verb form
want
then
they should live where Linking Words
others
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other
people
stay.
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Secondly
, why Linking Words
i
agree with Change the capitalization
I
this
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is
because anyone can come out Unnecessary verb
apply
from
massive situations. To be more precise, Change preposition
of
Daily
life Change preposition
in Daily
people
may have to face Use synonyms
with
many types of problems.Take money Change preposition
apply
problem
, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
home
Correct word choice
and home
crisis
for an example. So it can be solved if someone Fix the agreement mistake
crises
stay
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stays
arround
him or live with Correct your spelling
around
hime
. I strongly believe that only Correct your spelling
him
friends
can understand Use synonyms
those problem
in serious situations. But what is Change the determiner
that problem
those problems
more
need to live with some Add a comma
,more
friends
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.
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?
On the other hand
, there are so many Linking Words
people
who don't like to be in a group. Use synonyms
For instance
, being Linking Words
a
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a friend
friends
friends
can create chaotic environments or can be given bad Use synonyms
influnce
. Correct your spelling
influence
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, it will Linking Words
effect
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affect
on
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apply
like
. Change preposition
apply
Usually
these Add a comma
,Usually
people
want to be alone and use Use synonyms
only
self Add an article
the only
idea
.Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
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public
Correct article usage
the public
want
to ignore the chaotic environment. Doing work full day, Change the verb form
wants
people
like to Use synonyms
relexed
at night time. Correct your spelling
relax
relaxed
This
is why they live in some Linking Words
noise free
areas where Add a hyphen
noise-free
population
is low.
In conclusion, Add an article
the population
although
it is a common belief that Linking Words
people
who left family and live with Use synonyms
friends
often Use synonyms
their
intend to achieve Correct pronoun usage
apply
some thing
Correct your spelling
something
from
their future life. I believe that Change preposition
in
by
living with Change preposition
apply
friends
will give to them Use synonyms
many
help in daily life, Replace the quantifier
much
work-life
, and in Correct your spelling
work life
stress
situations .Replace the word
stressful
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