Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups, However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media websites?

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. We share our
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and
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on social
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and
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information
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media
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social life, so we should
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the world. When we are using social
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actually we need.
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, all age groups of
people
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using social
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recently
open a
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account, and he
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out some of his old
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chatting
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friends
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social
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because they can communicate with their
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their
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opinion
. On the other
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fake
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days ago a
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facebook
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account was hacked and
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taken
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some fake
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community
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people
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side of social
media
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we should
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carefull
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careful
carefully
to use it, and share its advantages and disadvantages with our
friends
and
familes
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families
family
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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