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Since the beginning of 21st century internet has been changed dramatically and working from home has become common. While working in the comfort of home may prove to be a blessing, office workers have some unmatchable benefits. This essay will discuss why office goers could be more productive than people who choose to be home-sourced.

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Dear Prashant, I am writing
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 to you to invite
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 the
Seminar
 and give a presentation. The
seminar
 will be held on
the
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January 31,
2023
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 in the Town Hall at 11:00 AM. The topic for the
seminar
 is ‘The Importance of Subject Integration in Education System’. We have been asked by the senior management to arrange
this
Seminar
 for the entire content department. Since our competitors are
following
this
 in their books, the management decided to add
this
 new component in our Books as a USP for the new session. The plan is to aware all the team members about
this
 to improve the quality of the Books. As you are handling the Science Department, you and your team can give a dynamic presentation to explain the integration of Science with other subjects. We are
also
 presenting on the Integration of Mathematics with other subjects. We have to present to the senior management and other team members. In case of queries, please feel free to write us. We can
also
 plan a meeting to discuss the requirements. Thanks, Ishpreet
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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