You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter * Say what the participant liked about the hotel. * Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. * Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
to draw your attention to our feedback about the experience of the company meeting we had at your hotel on 21st of March.
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wonderful hospitality. Welcoming the guests and arranging the hall for the meeting were absolutely appreciated. Our whole team gave a very positive opinion on Replace the word
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and the whole department was good.
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However
I would regret to show our dissatisfaction, Linking Words
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about food. We preferred non-vegetarian food with a dessert but we have not received dessert and Linking Words
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, preservatives were added. Our staff mentioned that some of them have stomach discomfort Linking Words
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all these are part of formal suggestions, would help you to improve your negative areas. I would like to suggest that proper supervision can make the changes in Linking Words
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cooking and before serving a professional quality checker should have to inspect foods and their quality.
I would appreciate it if you could consider these concerns and make the necessary changes.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Asha VijayanLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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