The chart below compares the percentages of tourism dollars spent in different economic sectors in two time periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compares the percentages of tourism dollars spent in different economic sectors in two time periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about how many tourism dollars people spent on five various categories in the years, 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, the proportions of food and beverages and playing some activities experienced a downward trend,
while
the percentages of staying at a hotel and transport showed a decrease during the period given.
In addition
, people consumed more money on experiencing the culture. Looking at the sector of eating and drinking, the rate was 3% in 2005 and
then
it increased to about 20% in 2015, The figure for sports activities considerably rose to almost 38%, making it the most popular activity. Regarding the proportion of hotels, the rate began at almost half in 2005.
Although
it dropped to around 38%, it remained the most preferable activity same as the sports sector.
By contrast
, culture and transport were the least popular activities at 4% and 5%, respectively. They slightly decreased to approximately 3% and 4%
at the end
of the period.
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