Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
Some individuals are of the opinion that violent scenes and actions on
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games
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people
act. From my standpoint, I am of the opinion that both arguments are justified. On the one hand, the phenomenon of aggressive Use synonyms
behaviours
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television
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games
may have negative impacts on audiences, especially the youth. Adolescents, the latter generation are innocent and easily affected by surroundings, Use synonyms
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as TV programs and video Linking Words
games
because of the lack of knowledge and experience, so they tend to copy actions from what they have seen. To illustrate, Use synonyms
people
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as a result
of modelling themselves after characters whom they enjoy. Linking Words
Besides
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games
teach Use synonyms
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that aggressiveness is normal in everyday life. Dwellers who are constantly exposed to violent computer Use synonyms
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then
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would connect those to reality and maybe confuse reality and the virtual world. Use synonyms
Therefore
, they cannot distinguish whether these violent actions are considered suitable or not on a daily basis. Linking Words
On the other hand
, there are many other factors that may encourage violent Linking Words
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Firstly
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people
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television
. Particularly, some Use synonyms
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who suffer from violence in their family or were bullied in schools in the past are likely to have bad Use synonyms
behaviours
. So they tend to utilize violence to solve their problem without caring about others’ emotions and relationships. Use synonyms
Secondly
, many detrimental occurrences through the mature process, Linking Words
such
as education, may lead to how they treat other individuals in the future. Linking Words
In other words
, kids who received low-quality education when they are at home and in school, seem not to have enough knowledge of legal and illegal Linking Words
behaviours
. So that they might act violently or hurt others without awareness. In conclusion, though violent Use synonyms
television
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games
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also
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