ome people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

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need to
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university or college to fulfil their dreams by getting respectful job opportunities. Where
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a few
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believed that after completing
school
learning students directly indulge
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in
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environment. In my,
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well qualification is necessary for
the
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better future and
successful
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career.
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,
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essay will elaborate on both notions which
further
leads to a logical conclusion. Commencing, in modern times, the population size has highly surged which causes competition between individuals
hence
to fight around
such
competitive surroundings one must well educational degrees with them.
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, the best route
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better
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life
is to have a higher education because
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always seek knowledge and educational certificates.
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, in India, an enormous number of
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aspirants
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in
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colleges because it is believed that a better job can only be achieved when
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an individual
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individual
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have a perfect amount of knowledge and bachelor's qualification. Moving
further
, some people think that they can directly indulge themselves in better jobs
although
in the contemporary ,era monetary
harships
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hardships
hardship
is high which
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wealth
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of humans.
Therefore
, students after completing
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school
learnings
they
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choose to work and to complete their needs in
life
.
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,
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school passed out
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candidates
wants
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to get
an
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early exposure to working
life
and earn money which would be helpful to them in living
successful
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a successful
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life
. In a nutshell, higher educational knowledge is necessary because
technogical
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technological
advancement can only be
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by the technical person.
Similarly
,
after
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after-school
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school
work not
be
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useful to survive in the world.
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are crucial to
eran
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earn
better in
life
.
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