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ome people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

#ome #people #university #college #route #career #job #school
It is often considered that the
masses'
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 need to
enroll
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 in
the
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 university or college to fulfil their dreams by getting respectful job opportunities. Where
,
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 a few
individual
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 believed that after completing
school
 learning students directly indulge
them
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in
working
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 environment. In my,
inclined
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 well qualification is necessary for
the
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 better future and
successful
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 career.
Thus
,
this
 essay will elaborate on both notions which
further
 leads to a logical conclusion. Commencing, in modern times, the population size has highly surged which causes competition between individuals
hence
 to fight around
such
 competitive surroundings one must well educational degrees with them.
However
, the best route
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better
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a better
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life
 is to have a higher education because
organisation
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organisations
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 always seek knowledge and educational certificates.
For example
, in India, an enormous number of
school passed
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 aspirants
admitted
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in
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 colleges because it is believed that a better job can only be achieved when
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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 have a perfect amount of knowledge and bachelor's qualification. Moving
further
, some people think that they can directly indulge themselves in better jobs
although
 in the contemporary ,era monetary
harships
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hardships
hardship
 is high which
affect
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wealth
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the wealth
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 of humans.
Therefore
, students after completing
their
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school
 learnings
they
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apply
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choose to work and to complete their needs in
life
.
For instance
,
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school passed out
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 candidates
wants
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want
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 to get
an
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apply
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early exposure to working
life
 and earn money which would be helpful to them in living
successful
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a successful
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life
. In a nutshell, higher educational knowledge is necessary because
technogical
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technological
 advancement can only be
handle
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 by the technical person.
Similarly
,
after
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after-school
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school
 work not
be
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is
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 useful to survive in the world.
In other words
, deep subject
informations
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information
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 are crucial to
eran
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earn
 better in
life
.
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