some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more im-portant than History

Some

people

believe that

History

is

one

of the most important lessons in school life, but another group of

people

claim that, nowadays, there are more important subjects like

Science

and

Technology

than

History

. In my opinion, I strongly agree that

history

is

one

of the major subjects which children should learn thoroughly. Primarily,

Science

and

Technology

developed until today regarding

people

's needs in our

history

and

while

Technology

and

Science

were improving, innovators used information that came from the past.

For example

, the population was raised

by

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time and

people

spread to a larger area and

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communication

of

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people

was going to be harder than ever.

As a result

of

this

, Graham Bell innovated the first phone in the past. By that time,

science

and

technology

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us all use

cellphones

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and even reach

people

from overseas.

However

,

this

innovation hasn't happened suddenly in our life. There is

history

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behind

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today

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innovations.

Secondly

,

history

is

one

of the important matters in our lives to know our roots. At the present time, the world is extremely large and it is so easy to find individuals who live everywhere. Regarding anthropologists, our

history

and nationality define our characteristic features. To know who we are and see our abilities and features, we should first learn where we are from and what our

history

is. Individuals have genetic

predisposition

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and those are really important matters

while

people

have genetic health issues, psychological problems and even if the career is the matter that

people

choose.

Moreover

, we need to know our

history

to know our past and to learn

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our mistakes and not try again which is tried on the past

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even if to put more

what

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is tried before. In conclusion, to build

future

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, not just students, even if

science

and

technology

need

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history

.

As a consequence

,

history

is

one

of the most important school subjects to learn.