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Recently, the internet is being used to get information on various aspects and to buy Goods. What do you think about advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

#internet #information #aspects #goods #phenomenon
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Nowdays the
internet
 is very important in our live. There are a lots of ways to
use
 the
internet
 and
this
 ESSAY is about advanteges and unfortunately disadvantages.
Internet
 was created a few years ago but it came to our live very fast because the
internet
 helps us with everething .
However
 the
internet
use
 to bad side . Please strap in as we take a look at the pluses and actually minuses. Pluses of the
internet
such
 as : A lots of new or interesting news ,online shops , very fast access to networks , online community and other things , of course advantages are many but
also
 there are the biggest minuses of the
internet
 : online robbing , online crime , many fauls news ... As I said above with
internet
 we can
use
 socialmedia , and i would talk about it in
this
 part of my writing . Networks are very fauls and very truth. I think using socialmedia is good for businessmen or for famous persons . Generally every single person has his or her own opinion about using the
internet
 (socilmedia) but in my point of view we have to
use
internet
 in helpful things and do not waste our time playing mobile games, play consoles or watching helpness videos.
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