Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A few nations across the globe enforce strict regulations on an

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individual

age to become legally eligible for consuming alcohol,

whereas

other countries reckon to maintain leniency towards

such

policies. In my opinion, I completely agree to impose rules in order to allow

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someone to start drinking,

otherwise

, it would plunder the future of a nation's younger generation. On the one hand, youth are more susceptible to

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easily into the trap of detrimental habits during their teenage

such

as smoking, drinking, drugs and womanizing.

Moreover

, they are not

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enough to understand the thin line between good and bad even though they knew the repercussions

from

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getting addicted to

such

things.

For instance

, a famous

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actor who got addicted to drinking during his teenage had completely ruined his career when he was performing at peak of it. He had to go to

rehabilitation

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for a lot of

time

to come out of it.

Hence

, it is absolutely necessary to allow people only after a certain age when they can determine rationally about which way to pick.

On the other hand

, nowadays most

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people are exposed to the corporate world where

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drinking has become a social stigma to

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and

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along well within a group.

However

, it is to enjoy the

time

off and spend

time

well with family and friends. As long as nobody gets addicted to it and

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well within limits without spoiling

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carrer

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career

carrier

as well as

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health,

then

there is no

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about it.

For instance

, consuming one or two drinks

such

as beer that

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less percentage of alcohol shouldn't be a major concern.

To conclude

, every nation must have strict rules around the age of a person to purchase and consume alcoholic drinks.

Additionally

, there has to be a limitation on how much a person should intake in a period of

time

to avoid major health effects by tracking it digitally across

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the world.