Some organization believe that their employees dess smartly. Others value quality of works above appearance Discuss boh these views and give your own opinion.
Handful individuals believe that their workers should dress smartly.
However
, others argue that quality
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the quality
work
should be better than their clothes
. So, in my opinion
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quality
of the work
the
most important for everybody.
On the one hand, wearing Add a missing verb
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uniforms
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big Correct article usage
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companies
. Wearing uniforms
is good for the big company because they are
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However
, employees
can wear attractive clothes
and it can disturb somebody and it can be cause for decreasing work
quality
. For example
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TV
program I have seen that one of the big Add an article
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of
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women
clothes
and it was reason
for disturbing others.
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a reason
On the other hand
, wearing uniforms
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clothes
because if individuals wear their favorite
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favourite
clothes
they feel better and it can be reason
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a reason
increasing
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for increasing
work
productivity. For instance
, recently form
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magazine
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a magazine
red
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employees
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companies
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are
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from their employees
.
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employees
to wear their favorite
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the limit
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companies
should set up rules about clothes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite