The graph shows average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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annual expenses on cell phones and residential phone services between the year

2001and

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2001 and

2010 respectively

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Jan 30, 2023

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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