The charts shows the amount and quality of water supplied to the regions of the world summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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the rate and value of water distributed to regions of the world

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Jan 30, 2023

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The charts shows the amount and quality of water supplied to the regions of the world summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Around the world, more and more people are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

Some people think that olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

These days many young people are spending less time doing outdoor activities such as hiking, mountain climbing, and enjoying nature. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage them to do more of these activities?

There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter -describe the problems -explain how these problems are affecting the public -suggest some changes that could be made.