The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

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of a hydroelectric power dam

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Linking words: Add linking words.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

16 words

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The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

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For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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