The bar chart illustrates the percentage of a car factory's total sale in four continents ( Asia, Europe, South America, Europe and Asia) annually during the five-year period from 2006 to 2010.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of a car factory's total sale in four continents ( Asia, Europe, South America, Europe and Asia) annually during the five-year period from 2006 to 2010.
The bar graph depicts the number of total sales in manufacturing cars which is categorized into four countries. The report surveyed annually from 2006 to 2010. In general, all of the proportion of vending indicated upward trends,
whereas
only cases in South America had a downward tendency.
According to
the data, Asia had a positive trend which increased slightly from 30% to approximately 35% between 2006 and 2007,
then
stabilized in the following
year
, and began to rose dramatically to 50% in 2010.
Similarly
, North America followed a similar pattern to that of Asia, which increased to around 12% in the
last
period.
On the other hand
, the percentage of total sales in Europe plunged dramatically from 20% in the first
year
to 30% in the next
year
, and fairly remained unchanged in 2008,
This
trend did not
last
long and began to plunge in 2009. Surprisingly, the number started to shoot up to 30% in 2010. Meanwhile, there was a declining proportion of trading cars in North America for the period, which started at 30% and
then
dipped to 10% in the
last
year
.
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