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The map below show the centre of a small town Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show the centre of a small town Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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signify
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 the narrowly developed
centeric
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central
 area
while
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 another shows well customise plans. Basic attributes of
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map
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the map
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, the present
map
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 doesn't seem
systematicly
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systematically
 developed.
However
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,
the
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another
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map
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 is
well planned
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. Presently, the streets are one-way but, the authorities aimed to construct the roads as dual
carriageway
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 in order to provide wider and better connectivity. As of now, the shops
are build
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 on
the
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both sides of
roads
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. When you take
glance
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 at
planned
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 town, the main street has been converted to pedestrians and it follows the modern construction of bus stations,
shopping
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centre
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centres
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, car parking and some modern housing.
Current
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map
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countryside
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on
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 the north,
in contrast
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no
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 countryside, that area has been modernised with
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 facilities. To
sump
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 up, we can a lot of variance on both the planned- charts of
small
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the small
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 town
center
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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