The line graph shows the recycling rate of household in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the recycling rate of household in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
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The presented line chart provides information about how the household recycled percentage-wise in the UK, France, and
Germany
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from 2005 to 2015. Generally speaking, the recycling rates in the UK and
Germany
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experienced a steady increase over the period. At the same time,
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it rose slightly
at the end
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of the period, the trend in France fell gradually over ten years.
According to
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the data illustrated in the chart, in 2005 the percentages of household recycling in the UK and
Germany
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were nearly 35% and 20%, respectively. The
rate
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in
Germany
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climbed steadily, exceeding France's
rate
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in 2010, and reaching almost 58% in 2015. The American household recycling
rate
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remained constant between 2007 and 2009.
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, it rocketed dramatically to about 55% before jumping to over 60%
at the end
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of the period.
On the other hand
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, Despite having placed the highest rank in early 2005, Franch's recycling
rate
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declined by approximately 50% in 2003, but grow smoothly to below 40%
at the end
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of the span.
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