The line graph shows the recycling rate of household in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The presented line chart provides information about how the household recycled percentage-wise in the UK, France, and
Germany
from 2005 to 2015.
Generally speaking, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany
experienced a steady increase over the period. At the same time, Although
it rose slightly at the end
of the period, the trend in France fell gradually over ten years.
According to
the data illustrated in the chart, in 2005 the percentages of household recycling in the UK and Germany
were nearly 35% and 20%, respectively. The rate
in Germany
climbed steadily, exceeding France's rate
in 2010, and reaching almost 58% in 2015. The American household recycling rate
remained constant between 2007 and 2009. However
, it rocketed dramatically to about 55% before jumping to over 60% at the end
of the period.
On the other hand
, Despite having placed the highest rank in early 2005, Franch's recycling rate
declined by approximately 50% in 2003, but
grow smoothly to below 40% at the end
of the span.Submitted by rocky_dillak on
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