The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the
percentage
of households
with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework per week per household.
The percentage
of households
with washing machine
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machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
increased from 1920 to 2019.
The growing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
percentage
of households
with Add an article
the refrigerator
refrigerator
was the most dramatic, it climbed from almost 0% to 100% in sixty years. After 1980, every family had refrigerators.
The Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percentage
of households
with vacuum cleaner
rose steadily and hit the peak point Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
at
100% in 2000.
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of
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
households
with washing mashine
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machine
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. It went up from 40%, in 1920 to 70%, in 1960 and dropped back to 65% in 1980. After 1980, the trend went upward.
The number of hours of housework per week decreased from 1920 to 2019. It dropped significantly in the first two years and it slipped lightly from 1960 to 2019.
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conclusion, Change preposition
In
while
the percentage
of households
with electrical appliances grows, the number of hours of housework per household declined
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declines
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