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Many young people change their jobs and career do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #change #jobs #career
In the ultra-modern epoch,it is a point of debate that a lot of young individuals modify their occupations
as well as
 professions.There are umpteen benefits and drawbacks to
this
 topic.The upcoming paragraph would shed light on my argument related to conception and will lead to a logical conclusion. Moving towards the merits first and foremost
one
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is a high incentive if individuals
revision
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 their designation they will reach
on
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a higher salary package.
However
, transforming the organisations' crowds will explore different experiences.Adding more to it people
also
 enhance their skills and knowledge.Apart from that changing of profession and company masses will
also
 get a high position of promotion.,
Moreover
 people
also
 get a lot of new opportunities in their life.
while
 individuals
also
 will benefit to get
the
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flexible time
of
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working. Probing ahead towards the demerits if employees always advance their
career
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 and work they will face a lack of stability.Moving
further
 they will waste so much time and money to advance their designation.,
Additionally
 employees will
cannot
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 grow in their profession and life
for example
 if the worker gives his time and extra effort to one company for 2 years after that if the employee suddenly changes his designation and profile
then
 he has to start again from
beginning
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.
To conclude
,revolution is the way of the world so,everyone has the right to transition their profession and career for their growth in life but before they modify their career they should have to see their position ,not money.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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